Fan Lei's essay talks comprehensively about the aspects of the climate model that may possibly influence our decision making on climate issues in the future.
In the first paragraph, the essay gives us an example of how a disaster was averted from happening to the people near Russian River by using the climate model established twenty years ago which oversees the climate conditions of Russian River area. Drawn from the example is the notion that the modeling of climate can be used to help us understand the climate issues in the future.
Then, in the following two paragraphs, the essay mainly states the advantages of the climate model and what benefits we could possibly gain in applying the climate models. One of the benefits is to predict disaster and another is to combat climate change.
Following that, the essay comes to the parts where discuss the negative sides of the climate change. Since, by now, we still do not have sufficient climate information that can cover the area of the whole earth, the conclusion we get may not be accurate. Moreover, there would also be some human error in modeling the climate. Therefore, it is not good enough for us to rely on currently.
The conclusion of the essay is that we should exploit the useful parts of the climate models with its flaws bearing in mind.
The organization of the essay is clear and logical. The main idea of each paragraph is also clear. However, the essay seems to be quite academic. For those who do not have knowledge in the area, it would be a bit difficult to understand. And the language used in the essay sometimes is confusing and accurate.
After all, it is a good essay and if the abovementioned flaws can be improved, it will be a better one.
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