Peer Review of Shao Tu's WA2 (by Pulkit Agarwal)

Shao Tu's essay has a very impact-full introduction with very appropriate examples being used with good corelation to past experiences.It also exhibits a very coherent and powerful way of expressing his thoughts.I pretty much liked the manner in which Shao Tu by posing several question was able to gather attention of the readers. Though I do feel that there was a lack of clarity as whether he is supporting the use of nuclear power as source of electricity or he is opposing .

Apart from this,I was highly impressed by the way Shau Tu was able to project both sides of the issue through the arguments presented but ,at the same time I was still confused as to which side is he taking. The essay maintains a constant flow and there was a good linkage between different aspects of the issue that were disscussed in the arguments.The examples that are used in the essay are very well connected to environment and can be related to our day to day lives .

At the end,I would just like to appreciate his sincere effort as his essay clearly portrays his in-depth research and hard work.Although if Shao Tu would have been a bit more clear as to which side of the argument he is favoring,it would have been much more influential.