The essay begins with a introduction which give us an idea of how serious the forests have been degraded and how serious the result will be if we let it continue happening. Then it reveals its main idea in the last sentence of the essay: "However, to fight against global warming, what we need is much more than such human efforts."
There are four paragraphs in the body of the essay, each of which has a clear topic.
The first paragraph of the body is an overall statement about what else do we need to combat climate change other than the human efforts, and we know the answer here: the integrated biodiversity.
Then, the following part is divided into to two part. to state the authors' views on the use of the integrated biodiversity.
The first part is the authors' call on more use of the integrated biodiversity and the benefits it would bring about.The second part tells us the importance of the biodiversity and the consequence if we fail to do so.
Then, in the conclusion part of the essay, it reiterate the importance of the use of the integrated biodiversity in combating climate change.
In the essay, transition sentences like "to begin with" are used, which makes the essay quite smooth.Sufficient supporting ideas are given to make it more persuasive.And the unity and coherence of the essay is generally good.
To conclude, my peer did a good job in doing this essay.
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